Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this set a bad example for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s scenario, it has been seen that celebrities have become famous for their lifestyle and status rather than for their accomplishments which has negative influence on youngster. I think this is due to exposure of celebrity’s life through social media. This essay will discuss impact of lifestyle of famous personalities on young people.
To begin with, I think now it has become impossible to escape celebrities from the mind of youth as they spend longer hours on internet to know about lifestyle of their favorite star which brings curiosity in them to be like them. Hence, they put lot of pressure on having the perfect body like them and lead to unhealthy disappointment with their body image. Even in the worst case, they go into depression. To illustrate, a survey found that 80% of youngsters compared themselves to images they see of celebrities. Moreover, youngsters are so influenced by their fame in terms of money that they just want to become famous instantly rather than bothering about their achievement which is based on their hard work. It further persuades them towards negative directions.
Furthermore, I believe youth age is age to set their identity in world. But youngsters have restricted their definition of success in their perfect body, a glamour life and having money. As a result, they have prevented them from discovering their self t. Besides this, there are celebrities who party a lot, drink heavily and take drugs open which encourage youngsters not only to accept same dangerous behavior, but also it has negative impact on health.
In conclusion, Although celebrities have gained success in their life on dint of their hard work and struggle, it seems that today’s youth mainly focus on their lifestyle they have today instead of paying attention to how they have such lifestyle.
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Suggestion:
...on dint of their hard work and struggle, it seems that today’s youth mainly focus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09634551495 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78196307498 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0423259545 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230983520568 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799335918645 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759444009368 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158849758199 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767432148248 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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