Nowadays families move to different countries to work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this fast-moving world, Everyone considers concentrating on developing themselves. many people of the view that it is a negative impact on children, while others believe that it is a good development for individuals. this essay will discuss both views with relevant my example to support my opinion.
To begin with, Nowadays, many families are planning to transfer abroad for several reasons. Thus, offsprings cannot learn the culture of their root because they do not get a chance to learn in different countries with its local people. As a result, traditional culture and language are extinct in some cases. For example, As per the survey, In new-zealand, many Indian people speak with their children in english whether its rooted language is hindi. So, their infants cannot try to speak their native language and forget their domestic culture. Consequently, many people think that it is a negative effect on the new generation. On the other side, I think that parents should teach their children native traditions. Therefore, they can accept it with other cultures.
Furthermore, For individual, people move any developing nations for studies or work. In a developed country, people can receive the value of their work with a satisfying salary wage. Next, The lifestyle is better to compare to under developing nations. For Instance, In India, unemployment is the biggest issue. As per research by the government, there are 60% of engineers are jobless. Even, For high qualified people, it is hard to find a well-pleased working environment. Accordingly, to study, people who lived in other countries are more satisfied with their life. On the whole, I think that it is a good development for them to get employment opportunities with a better lifestyle.
To summarize, this essay has discussed the positive and negative side of the movement of people in different countries. According to me, this is to say that moving overseas is the dramatic evolution with a new career and lifestyle but parents should go with their native tradition and pass it to offsprings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, in some cases, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16913946588 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8829752487 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6928999824 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9523809524 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0476190476 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233456219727 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688916703769 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625820778505 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144185943264 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512327334354 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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