There is a growing trend nowadays where families are moving to various foreign countries in search of work. It is believed by some people that it can have negative impact on children. Both views are discussed in this essay thoroughly and based upon these views an opinion is formed.
Firstly, countries like Canada and U.S.A. are having immigrants from all over the world. Number of immigrants in such countries have proliferated as they provide better job opportunities and healthy lifestyle. Therefore, people from destitute countries often prefer to live in these North American nations. However, It is often thought by some people that this might have a negative impact on children as they find it difficult to adapt into completely new culture and surroundings. Although, these children do have initial reluctance in adhering to the new environment, they gradually start to become part of it over a period of time. Countries in North America also provides better education facilities compared to immigrants native countries such as India, Pakistan and China. Therefore, immigrants often want their children to study in such country's institutes.
After families move to these countries, children often follow the culture of their host country and slowly transform themselves accordingly. Although, teenagers often remember their native country's culture, young children never seem to adapt them despite efforts from their parents. The behavior that young children demonstrate is often influenced by their friends and teachers. For instance, 80% of Indian born Canadian children don't even know national anthem of India.
To conclude, it might seem that children are getting affected adversely in foreign countries, they are also benefited by the facilities provided to them in these countries. In my opinion, It is responsibility of parents to teach their children about their home country's cultures and they should also guide them to become better individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46885245902 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75248586675 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.846173198 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210613980537 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772520199331 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487329429997 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14932650156 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941353105699 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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