It is often thought that people should generally get married before turning 30. In my opinion, there are various factors which need to be considered before taking this decision. All these factors along with their advantages and disadvantages are discussed in this essay.
Nowadays, people are more focused and concerned about their respective careers. Therefore, they continue to procrastinate their marriage even after being in a relationship. According to medical science, ideal average age for a couple before having kids should be between 25 to 30. For instance, 90% doctors around the world believe that child carrying capacity of female uterus decline rapidly after the age surpasses 30. Moreover, pressure of having kids before 30 from family and society also influence one's decision of early marriage.
A female spouse is seen as a burden in certain part of the world as they become dependent on her male counterpart for livelihood. The trend has now shifted after females were introduced to introduced to jobs in early part of 20th century. It is frequently thought that having an understanding before getting married is also essential before having kids in order to avoid spoiling their life. To illustrate this, according to a study in North America, 45% of divorces occur after a kid is born. To prevent divorces after having kids, partners are generally recommended to have mutual understanding before having kids.
To conclude, it is mostly dependent upon individuals choice about whether he/she wants to marry at a early age or not. Advantages of getting married before turning 30 are relatively more compared to tying the knot after turning 30.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'introduced to'.
Suggestion: introduced to
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended having'.
Suggestion: recommended having
...ter having kids, partners are generally recommended to have mutual understanding before having kids...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... about whether he/she wants to marry at a early age or not. Advantages of getting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23134328358 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71031173635 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1523089386 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245079410701 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082747856186 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641491049126 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154774098742 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399039682166 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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