Thanks to faster transportation means, like bullet trains and jets, travelling these days has become commonplace. People move not only for pleasure but sometimes they have to take a trip for business purpose. Health professionals, scientists, salesmen all of these figures once in a while attend to conferences and workshops to sell products, to deliver a speech or just to keep up to date. It has been observed however that in many cases these people prefer to travel alone rather than taking their families with. In this essay I will examine the plus and the minus of this approach and explain why I think that it is better to take a business trip alone.
The reasons people go for a business trip are several: some have to give a speech or a presentation to convince the audience to buy a product or they have to illustrate the latest discoveries in medical field. Others take part to seminars to stay informed about the newest technologies or to gain specific skills they can eventually turn to in their job. As we can easily understand from the previous lines, attention,focus and energy are needed in order to obtain the best result from a business trip. Sometimes a successful trip can be the key to obtain a promotion or to achieve a deeper knowledge. Taking with the family can be thus a source of distraction that can lead to low performance and poor results.
Another aspect that we should take into account are the costs linked to a business trip. Usually companies reimburse the cost sustained by the employees but at the same time they establish a clear upper limit for expenses. In many cases employees are allowed to stay only in low-budget hotels or to travel only second class. Extra cost for family members will not be covered so that the employee will have to pay on his own for it. This is also a valid reason that leads people to travel alone.
In conclusion, I think that going on business trip should be taken seriously because it can represent the turning point of a career in a positive as well as in a negative way. Employees need to be focused on the goal and do not need distractions or trouble created by the family. The financial aspect plays also an instrumental role, since companies only cover the strict costs that are essential for the business trip.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, thus, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68316831683 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65018453893 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539603960396 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.66182037 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251090928393 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749675426319 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635642503215 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149989203346 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494107487374 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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