nowadays the internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous . is this a positive or negative development.
In this technological advancements, world wide web and media has given paramount importance. With the real use of it third millennial are getting its multifarious benefits. Indeed, there is no lie that the modern generation is becoming eminent in their fields with the vintage of using social media, online websites, trades, youtube videos and
In the yesteryear, people browse the web for the source of information and official works. Moreover, the work is limited to printing, scanning, making presentations and filling forms. In this contemporary era, Google is used to earning money. It is proved that half of the population is earning and becoming renowned through online stuff. It was the time when only rich artists who have a beautiful voice and have some recognition with a producer can be able to become a singer in the film city. But currently, it is not like that. An average person who has a unique talent in him/her have a chance to show their skills via youtube videos and making it a night success by posting it on social media accounts. For instance, a housewife who has skills of making delicious foods make its video shoot and then upload it on their blogs. Besides this, her videos will get millions of subscribers and followers. It is the way through which they become stars in a night.
Moving the ball further, the reality shows such as Kaun Banega crorepati, Americas got talent, comedy shows and so on, have become the medium for people to outcast their skills and show it to the world. In addition, children participate in shows such as American idol, little singing stars etc with these television episodes they become successful.
To be continued, gone were the days when only superstars can become eminent. With the ease of lower rate of mobile data, free sign up to social websites as well as with the help of media upliftment it is potentially flexible to reach the goals of life every person have a dream to be.
In my personal opinion, this is a positive trend through which a person can become rich and eminent in their lifecycle with cost-effective internet opportunities and broadcasting television news and channels.
To recap, in my views technology has its two sides, one can be used in the favour and other can be in its wrong way. Until now people are seeing its boon when they soon become famous but after a years of success, they face failure when they are forgettable by people in their replacement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ine websites, trades, youtube videos and In the yesteryear, people browse the web...
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Line 6, column 7, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...very person have a dream to be. In my personal opinion, this is a positive trend through which...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
... when they soon become famous but after a years of success, they face failure when they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, third, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82185273159 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64126821985 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555819477435 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9000176766 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.842105263 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1578947368 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190491744597 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512172081805 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407842309821 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926892628332 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361744416808 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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