You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged.
Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter
inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled
describe your suitcase and what happened to it
explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards the worse condition of my property when I was on the journey from Whistler to Surrey on 28 th september through the bus.
Firstly, I departed from Scottsdale bus stop with transit number 364 at 5.30 p.m. I was having my suitcase which upon bus driver request I put it in the shelves provided for the allocating things. Likely, there were of varied types so I have put my name tag on the bag for an identification of my belonging.
Moving farther, on the second day when were in between, the bus collided with a huge tree suddenly and the materials fall down. Luckily, no one injured everyone as everyone was in the rest areas for refreshments and other things. Likewise, the driver has gone to the fill the gas. People were amusing with each other on the way about the bus accident.
Finally , upon reaching on our destinations I have identified that belongings were in the wear and tear place. Even the zip of my bag not working properly. It was torn out from one side. As, the bus driver did not mention us about this pity condition. I suddenly shouted on him for this inconvenience but he neglected this fault and was no shook of worriedness about this due to which I have to make decision to complaint of this situation.
I hope that you will compassionate with a another bag or full refund. As the loss is incurred by the bus driver for his irresponsibility.
I am hopeful that you will rectify your mistake.
Your faithfully,
Jasmine
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... property when I was on the journey from Whistler to Surrey on 28 th september t...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...m Whistler to Surrey on 28 th september through the bus. Firstly, I departe...
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...I have put my name tag on the bag for an identification of my belonging. Mov...
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Line 17, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...way about the bus accident. Finally , upon reaching on our destinations I hav...
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Line 17, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...my bag not working properly. It was torn out from one side. As, the bus driver di...
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Line 17, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...operly. It was torn out from one side. As, the bus driver did not mention us abou...
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Line 17, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ence but he neglected this fault and was no shook of worriedness about this due ...
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Line 17, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...s fault and was no shook of worriedness about this due to which I have to make d...
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Line 21, column 41, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...I hope that you will compassionate with a another bag or full refund. As the loss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, so, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67153284672 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69459207419 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5455775791 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19609857451 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644420124983 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575029498646 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108602353173 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422637318881 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.