Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say
– Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished.
– Suggest a future use for this building.
– Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.
Dear Mr Singh,
I am James the local resident of central city road. The purpose of my writing is to bring your attention to terminate the orders of destruction of ancient museum in our locality alongwith its peculiar features it served for many years to our society. Let me elaborate in details.
Basically, the museum devotes to our cultural heritage and perseverance of our past traditions and styles of architecture. Besides, it is significant to droves of people who are addicted to visit it in their leisure time. Moreover, the museums has vast sculptures, artifacts , posters, metals and so on relevant things that has been preserved since from many years. Likewise, visualization of these past items offer intriguing knowledge to children. Ultimately, elderly people are more attractive to this monument regularly. Hence, bulldozing this site will affect their lives.
Additionally, conservation of this property will deliver crucial information to the upcoming generation. Needless to say, If they are no longer preserved than it can result in loss of tradition and cultural knowledge to a new group. Thus, it is a common pledge to retain it to safeguard our history.
Lastly, Government as well as business corporations have enormous money to dispose on the renovations and maintenance of building to sustain it for prolonged time. I hope you consider this matter at quickest.
Your faithfully,
James.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, lastly, likewise, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43111111111 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01246529235 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4064274887 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4666666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102227476813 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277641625711 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295560365182 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059004279253 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335125998285 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 41.2886597938 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.