Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and another aspect of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? What kind of people would find it hard to achieve?
These days, it has become an uphill task for a majority of community to manage personal and professional life. Making rapport between work and other aspects, such as family and entertainment is crucial because it helps to strengthen the bonding among family members and is the cure of some psychometric issues.
However, cut-throat competition and rising costs of basic facilities are two prominent culprits which make it difficult to achieve.
Moving on to consider the significance of the balance between home and office, obtaining this status can assist one to spend one's quality point effectively. If an individual spends some time with relatives, it will enhance the relationship and lead to a better society, which eventually provides the person more satisfaction.
Apart from this, devoting some duration to leisure activities would stop masses to fall prey to some mental ailments, such as anxiety and depression. A recent survey conducted has shown that about 56% of workers are suffering from psychological diseases due to spending most of their time in the office. Thus, including free hours in the daily schedule can keep the masses away from such obstacles.
In regard to the reasons, the race of getting promoted to higher positions in an organization is the main reason. That is to say, most of the multitudes remain glued to the assignments around the clock to surpass their opponents in the competition, and have no time to utilize for rest. Moreover, many companies set targets for their employees that they have to complete to get a better salary. Research has revealed that workers engaged in the private sector have to job overtime to reach the targets to stay in the company for a long turn. Furthermore, the costs of rudimentary needs are burgeoning day by day which forces society to earn more to provide a better life for their children, therefore they task more and fail to manage family and office aspects.
On balance, taking all points into account, I am inclined to believe that, although the work-life balance is difficult to attain due to some issues, we should still understand how it is important to have it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, apart from, such as, in regard to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06179775281 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74373073132 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612359550562 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.373459971 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179695921934 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506020321729 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472141938044 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856395351093 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442620667979 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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