Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are more important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
<span id="docs-internal-guid-077ef459-7fff-7079-ffd4-e63b5cb8154f"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">It’s argued that people must tackle the issue related to the extinction of numerous animals, while others think that humanity should be prioritized. Although many urgent mankind problems need most resources to solve, I believe that preserving the animal world to remain the balance of nature is more essential.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">People believe that the human race should be placed on the top because authorities need to prioritize their funding for global issues threatening directly human life. In other words, the humankind is facing various problems, such as climate change and air pollution, affecting directly to human life which solving it required governments and people to concentrate all the resource. For example, a report of U.N. organization in 2017 showed that countries have to spend at least 100 million dollars to set up a natural reserve and this amount can help millions of poor people overcome their hunger. However, I believe that men and women must conserve the potential extinct animal due to its critical role in the natural world.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">On the other hand, some argued that state authorities and people urgently protect the animal species facing extinction because these creatures play a vital role in the natural cycle. And the extinction of these cannot recover, which damages to the balance of the natural world and causes many negative consequences to the Earth and human beings, such as rocketing a particular species population or depleting many food chains. For instance, the mass extinction of the lion in Australia helps to increase the Kanguru population to a dangerous level and this affects the farm crops. Moreover, I believe that governments, businesses, and people should protect the animal world, thus the younger generation doesn’t need to learn many animal species through books.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">In conclusion, while some believe that humanity is the first priority due to many human life threats which need concentrating many resources, I believe that people and authorities have to seek for solutions of the extinct animal to maintain the natural world in a balanced stance.</span></p><div><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"><br></span></div></span>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3197.0 1615.20841683 198% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 7.6119047619 5.12529762239 149% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.02670358165 2.80592935109 322% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478571428571 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 851.4 506.74238477 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 278.874719856 49.4020404114 565% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 399.625 106.682146367 375% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.5 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.625 7.06120827912 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12860763165 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785542347343 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236292961168 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12860763165 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.7 13.0946893788 311% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.14 50.2224549098 -30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 27.75 12.4159519038 224% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 37.0 9.78957915832 378% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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