Nowadays, parents spend most of their life working in factories or multinational corporations and hardly manage time for their children at home. Often they would entrust the childrearing responsibility to either grandparents or childcare centers. In my opinion, both appear to be good to certain extents as follows.
On the one hand, care from close family members can certainly help to boost the child's growth because of their unconditional love and affection. It is widely believed that grandparents or aunts, for example, are experienced in terms of childrearing, together with their love as a connection, which enables them to understand the children's need and provide appropriate care accordingly. To be more specific, grandparents would change the toddler's nappies, patiently feed him with great facility in a way that they did to the parents; as well as this, they rarely get furious because this duty is fulfilled with their genuine love.
On the other hand, I also believe that childcare centers also prove a decent choice for some reasons. Firstly, staffs in childcare organizations are mostly well-trained to be professional in their field. For instance, they can endure the annoyance, or easily come up with brilliant solutions in emergencies like when a child cuts his finger, and this expertise enables children to be raised healthily and safely. Secondly, children's social skills could be nurtured in the childcare center's environment, meaning that kids live together as a community, which helps them boost their communication skills, basic interactions, and teamwork abilities that will support them in the future.
In conclusion, both methods seem to outweigh their relatively minor drawbacks. Parents should be careful in choosing an appropriate environment for children so that they can be nourished suitably to become good citizens. Governments should also take resolute actions to facilitate parents to balance between working and rearing their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50819672131 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00597988626 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6376335322 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243339831587 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849397383246 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483104483089 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146696666557 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401796362031 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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