Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the present times the several jobs are exhausting with long working hours. In this essay we will discuss the reasons for increase in stress, moreover, necessary steps to be taken by the employer to reduce stress level of employees.
The increase in the competition level forces people employed in companies to work overtime. Everyone is in the race of beating others in the corporate world and to get promoted to high level positions thus, they spend hours working in offices to meet their goals and objectives. Moreover, organisations employee a smaller number of people in order to reduce the expenses in paying salaries, health benefits and travel cost. This leads to not only increase in the pressure but also the work load on existing employees as they are required to work for extra hours to complete the work. Additionally, people spend more time in offices for finishing work because of the fear that they might lose their job to a more competent and efficient employee. To elucidate, more than 80 percent of people working in large organisation live a stressful life with no time for their family and friends.
The employer of the organisations should ensure that the stress of employees is reduced and that they get the opportunity to spend time with their loved ones. The jobs should be designated among employees depending on their capabilities and resources. The duties and responsibilities and duties must be clearly defines by the employer so that there is no confusion. In addition to this employes should provide the opportunity to interact with their colleagues and spend some quality time with each other in order to destress them. The employer should establish the work schedules in such a way that employees have time to spend with their family.
To conclude, we have discussed both the reason of increase in the work load and stress of employees as well as the steps employer should take in order to reduce the stress so that they can live a happy and healthy life
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'steps'' or 'step's'?
Suggestion: steps'; step's
... and stress of employees as well as the steps employer should take in order to reduce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6446477306 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473372781065 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9764293171 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20367651616 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810224641539 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454882870881 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143742340719 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211991453571 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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