Nowadays, many people have to work longer times, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons ? What can employers do to make their life easier ?

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Nowadays, many people have to work longer times, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons ? What can employers do to make their life easier ?

These days people have to work extended hours, and it is leeding to increased stress among them. There are number of causes for growth of anxiety. this essay shall analyse some reasons for developing mental strain at the workplace, and also suggest some solutions that an employers should take to reduce it.

To begin with, excessive workload, fast paced work environment, growing competition, and reduced job security are some of the causes of increasing workplace stress. individuals nowadays has to take lots of workload with unrealistic deadlines. In order to finish a job, they have to work more than their scheduled shift. With the increasing population, company has so many potential candidates looking for a job. hence, if an individual makes a mistake or if he is not performing well, he might get fired. Indicating, that employees do not have any job security.

Digging dipper, work environment does not promote interpersonal relationship with coworkers. Therefore, they feel isolated and depressed. Moreover, I think poor traffic management is one of the causes of increasing anxiety. employee often get stuck in unpredicted traffic congestion and take stress on reaching office at time.

employers can take lots of step to cope up with problem. By giving realistic deadlines, and creating a healthy competition, so that employee do not have to rush to finish their assigned work. Human resource department can make some polices, that gives their employee some future job security. Further more, they can also organise some get together parties for their employees, that give them time to know their coworkers and can share a bonding with them. this will help them to do a better team work with less conflicts and hence, reduced anxiety.

In a nutshell, stress among employee is a major concern and companies should take some necessary steps to help their employees to maintain a better mental health and enjoy their work rather than taking it as load.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, i think, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70589633948 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9695815277 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5789473684 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222402828431 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693750537921 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557214310365 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119374147398 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395968549297 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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