Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
In this developed century people are more likely to buy products from the masterbrands. There are several main reasons leading to this trend. In my opinion this propensity is absolutely good for the economic growth and life quality.
To begin with, it is easy to see why people have tendency to buy stuffs which has high reputation in the markets. First of all, they believe that their money won’t be wasted to low quality products. For this logic, if people buy goods from famous brands they will gets absolutely reliable guarantee such as a full return demand when something goes wrong. In this case, the products must come up to standards and take responsibility for the face of the company. Moreover, buying things from a leading company will helps consumers have a high standard customer service such as loyalty card, gift certificate, coupons, and so on. On the other hand, cheap trademark cannot really achieve those expensive standard.
it is reasonable for those buyers, including me who believe that the shopping more of famous symbol makes our life better and wonderful for the economic development. According to many people, the present of the big company force the small logo to try harder in the economic war. Indeed, if the small labels or those who have just start up want to survive and not to be insolvent, they have to try more than enough to perfect their products and invest wisely in customers’ believe. Therefore, this may help the industrial evolution to be better. Besides, with that effort our life will be guarantee to be more enjoyable with those high standard products.
In General, it is comprehensible why purchaser want to buy things from masterbrands and this tendency guides to some precious advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
... buy goods from famous brands they will gets absolutely reliable guarantee such as a...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ying things from a leading company will helps consumers have a high standard customer...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ly achieve those expensive standard. it is reasonable for those buyers, includi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, in general, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99657534247 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62392915723 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7242215668 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189451858953 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653239063433 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497268704522 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123284288173 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430374987618 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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