Nowadays many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at a university. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. Include relevant examples in your answer.
In this contemporary and competitive world, majority of students are moving out of their towns for further studies and professional courses in universities. However, some prefer to live with their loved ones and serve their own town. This essay would discuss both positive and negative aspects of both.
Many opine that students who live alone are more independent in taking care of themselves and are much adaptive to the diverse culture of the university. In addition, to gain better knowledge and to adapt specific skills, students tend to migrate to another cities in pursue of better future. For example, to become a doctor in specific field such as neurosurgery or orthopedic one needs to pursue the studies in that specific subject which may not be available in their hometown. However, this also may have a negative impact on their families. In urge to make a better future students move out of their house, leaving their parents behind with the feeling of loneliness. This may lead to depression or depreciation of their parent’s health with growing age.
On the other hand there are some students who choose to live with their families. In this scenario students have the advantage of been taken care by their family members. Also the cost of living in the hometown is certainly less when it comes to staying with families. For instance, students living alone or at university hostels pay a lot for their accommodation and have extra expenditures in comparison to those living with their families. But at the same time, those who choose to stay with their families loose on the opportunity to take up the better courses which may help them to shape their career.
To conclude, every individual has its own priority in making this tough decision. Some may find it beneficial to move out for their personal growth and some find it useful to be around their loved ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98427672956 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61608194359 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5189333579 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258027360262 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918545906366 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485660506663 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151541733414 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723226698618 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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