Nowadays, the mobile phone plays a major role in our lives, which brings many benefits to us but also contains some drawbacks.Both these sides will discussed in this essay.
Every day new phones are launched that play a huge role in people's lives and with all the benefits they have, they also cause problems in people's lives.
Technology has made a lot of progress today, and in the mobile field as well, the whole life of people has been integrated into one.Nowadays people do all their work like shopping, greeting, and this saves people time.And they can easily download many things like books, music and games.People connect with their phones to different people around the world, so they can talk to each other on global issues and share their opinions.Also, a merchant can find many customers using his phone and thus increase his sales.
It is true that the phone has many benefits, but it has many drawbacks that I will mention in the text below.Firstly, the phone has made family members get away from each other, so they also use the phone while eating.And also family members go to see each other and make video calls using the phone.And this has disintegrated the focus of the families and is causing a lot of social damage.On the other hand, research has shown that the waves emitted from the handset have many effects on the body, especially the brain and it can even increase the incidence of various cancers in people.This is causing a lot of damage to the government, especially in treating people.
In conclusion,I believe that although the phone has many benefits for the public and society, overuse of it has physical and social consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8326848249 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5470128777 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 228.835503146 49.4020404114 463% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.5 106.682146367 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.25 20.7667163134 309% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.5 7.06120827912 347% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17800905908 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111197671405 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226062900402 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111197671405 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226062900402 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 13.0946893788 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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