Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
In this modern world, the majority of the people have a sedentary lifestyle as compared to their ancestors and therefore, develop critical health-related issues such as obesity. In this essay, I will discuss the lack of physical exercise and consumption of unhealthy food as primary reasons behind this growing trend, and later, submit some viable solutions to deal with this situation.
People spend long hours in their sitting jobs to earn more money and compete with each other but at the cost of their physical well-being. In addition to this, they have become heavily reliant on electrical appliances such as washing machines, dishwashers and food processors and do not even indulge themselves in a passive form of exercise. On the other hand, our earlier generation was quite fit and healthy because of carrying out routine tasks with manpower. For example, in the past time, people had to walk long miles to their work and meet relatives but now people use means of transportation for long distances. Secondly, the food choice of the modern generation has changed and they consume plenty of junk food such as pizza, burger. These processed foods are not good for health and lead to many health problems such as obesity, sugar, a higher level of cholesterol. On the other side, our ancestors used to eat a homemade meal including all the nutrients. Therefore, we can say all these factors contribute to the poor physical health of the current generation.
A possible solution to this phenomenon would be to encourage people to adopt a healthy lifestyle including a balanced diet consisting of protein, vitamins, carbohydrates and essential minerals, and at least half an hour of workout daily. This could be done by spreading awareness by means of social media and educational programmes at the school level. Recently, the prime minister of India has uploaded his video of posing yoga on Twitter and that fit movement gained momentum in no time and motivated the whole nation to stay fit. Also, many IT companies nowadays are offering free gym memberships to their employees to promote a healthy lifestyle. Lastly, the government can impose higher taxes on junk food to reduce its consumption. This way people will stop purchasing such expensive food items and turn to homemade economical food.
To conclude, modern people are unfit and unhealthy due to their unhealthy food choices and lazy routine. Government initiatives in the form of public awareness and increased tax on fast food could help to reverse this popular trend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...asks with manpower. For example, in the past time, people had to walk long miles to their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12230215827 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71590118533 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6940016604 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140541165912 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395809220497 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028360130125 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868028483309 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277665436677 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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