nowadays museums and historical sites are visited mainly by Foreign tourists rather than by locals. Why this happening? What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites?

Essay topics:

nowadays museums and historical sites are visited mainly by Foreign tourists rather than by locals. Why this happening? What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites?

It is widely seen that historical places and museums are largely visited by tourists and local people avoid exploring them. This essay will explore the possible reason for this trend and suggest a viable solution to encourage native people to visit museums and historical monuments.

To embark, there are many reasons why local citizens do not visit museums. First and foremost, people find it boring to visit such places. It takes a considerable amount of time to explore these heritage sites and people hardly find anything new there. So people feel it is a waste of time to visit monuments and art galleries. As a result, the number of local residents visits their museums is very low. Instead of this, they prefer to commute far away places for exploring new things which are more exciting and challenging than visiting nearer historical sites and monuments. A tourist, on the other hand, is eager to explore new places of interest in their destinations, and museums and historical places will assist them to have a better understanding of the rich history and local culture and traditions of the nations, they are visiting.

The government, however, can take steps to encourage local residents to attend museums and historical buildings. Firstly, authorities can organize cultural events and regular exhibitions at these places to provide people with a new experience every time they visit them. The second solution would be offering free tickets and discounts at weekends so that low-income groups and middle-class families can explore them. To illustrate, school can come up with assignments related to the history of a country, and this will motivate guardians to take their children to the local museums to collect useful information which will help them excel in their studies.

To recapitulate, local people do not enjoy visiting museums and historical places because there is not much they can learn from these places. Foreigners, nevertheless, are curious to learn and understand their destinations and hence they make it a point to visit these places. The authorities can encourage more natives to visit by conducting interesting programs like exhibitions at such places and offering free tickets or discounts.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, nevertheless, second, so, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25698324022 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74355716098 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502793296089 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7675485575 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.625 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320460481503 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120836131238 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665622633551 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220195880555 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524029535548 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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