Nowadays parents put too much pressure on the children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?
There is no doubt that children in these modern times are facing excessive parental pressure to achieve success, owing to the surge in competition to obtain a lucrative job and education. In my opinion, it is a negative trend as it not only makes the juveniles stressful but also vanishes their innate talents.
To begin with, the most crucial factor why parents usually pressurize their offsprings to succeed in studies and every task they perform is the rise in the competition for getting admission in renowned institutes and availing employment. The reason for this is most of the qualified educational institutions and job departments conduct competitive exams, which, in turn, select the candidates with highest scores and proficient skills. For instance, every year the cutoff of engineering exam to qualify for the selection in the Delhi University reaches to 95%, this clearly signifies that students with intelligent minds can secure their position in this institute. Therefore, the acquisition of better opportunities in education and profession urge the parents to persuade their children to excel in every step of their life.
However, in my perspective, this is not a positive phenomenon as this can instil a feeling of stress and can destroy the inbuilt skills of the children. This is because continuous pressure of studies and distance from the activities of their own interest usually lead to the isolation of children, as a consequence, they can suffer from phycological illness. Moreover, extreme pressure of studies and fear of failure sometimes tread the juveniles to wrong paths, as a result, in stress they commit unethical actions such as suicide, drug addiction and misbehave with elders. For example, according to the child survey by the government of Delhi, there is a 20% increase in the suicide rate of students who were suffering from study pressure, from the last 5 years.
In conclusion, although to acquire the zeniths of success in this competitive world hard work is quintessential at each facet of life, in my view, pressurizing the juveniles for this is not a good approach as it can destroy peace from their lives and surpasses their inborn skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
..., which, in turn, select the candidates with highest scores and proficient skills. For insta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21408450704 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8809617297 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569014084507 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8292475478 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.272727273 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2727272727 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8181818182 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250139540112 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939542183539 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528323271239 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143003981273 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416840483267 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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