Nowadays people are influenced by fashion, in particular when choosing their clothes and hairstyle. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
The fashion industry has an ample effect on societies these days. Some people, therefore, opt for wearing fashion clothes or hairstyles. This essay aims to show that this trend is indeed detrimental due to the fact that following it is both expensive and impractical.
One reason acknowledges following fashion is a negative development can be identified as its high costs. Fashion clothes and hairstyles cost a lot, forcing people to allocate a colossal amount of their income to pay for these extravagances, which in turn may cause financial troubles for them. A recent survey in London, for instance, has shown that, annually, some people spend 5 thousand Sterling Pounds on fashion designed products, which is about two month’s national median wage. This highlights the high expenses that following fashion demands.
Another line of thought on the fashion’s influence on people suggests its impracticality. Waring fashion clothes or hair-models is incompatible with daily life and thereby performing day-to-day routines will be harder for people who wear these products or dress their hair this way. I myself, for example, once had bought a bag designed by a famous brand, however, due to its size and the incontinence thereof, was not able to use it every day. Moreover, statistics show that more than 82 percent of fashion designed merchandise bought by housewives in California state, in the US, are used only once. This evidence demonstrates that people find using fashion products inconvenient to the degree that they stop using them after one try.
To summarize, this essay has clearly shown the influence of fashion on the masses has been a negative development because of its high costs and impracticality.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29710144928 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93914508472 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3334965161 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220715291937 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821126949997 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392677713216 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140262555325 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258255522603 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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