Nowadays people have a lot of stress. Why is that? How to reduce it?
In this era, people are facing mental pressure much more than the previous times. While numerous reasons could be linked to this phenomena, however I, believe that substantial causes would be the non-availability of relaxation time and constant need of hard work for survival. These points will be explained in subsequent paragraphs, also this essay will highlight the possible solutions to this problem.
Firstly, it is extremely difficult to create Work-Life balance. This makes impossible to find personal time where one could relax and enjoy life by engaging in hobbies like painting or singing, or outing with friends. This constant work routine deprive one of happiness and as a result anxiety and depression have become common; supported by the survey organized by health magazine which shows that two out of three workers are fighting with depression. Secondly, in this this ever thriving world, one has to keep working hard for survival. This sustainability trend creates an image of survival-of-fittest which bring emotional pressure from the childhood to secure a respectable position in society.
Stating the feasible solution to the problem in question, first of all individual facing such problems should spare some time for family or even for oneself. This will not only help in relaxation of mind but also provide better understanding of ongoing situations. For example, psychiatrists propose two hour of daily personal-time for the depressed individuals. Additionally, companies can lessen the work burden on employees for efficient working and also work-space could be made creative to minimize the tension. Government can also participate by implementing labor laws and facilitating public to reduce societal burden.
In conclusion, while stress could emerge from constant work and community culture, individuals, organizations and government, all can contribute toward the mitigation of the situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59863945578 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06546191982 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656462585034 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3252372174 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0354677420411 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0137788036734 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230133321602 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0246370053568 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010803597108 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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