Undeniably, health and fitness is of paramount significance for healthy and elongated lifespan. It's frequently coversated that fitness was more visualised among bygone era folks rather than contemporary epoch society. Umpteen of reasons could be held responsible behind occurrence of such phenomenon. However, possible remedial measures could be taken into consideration to overcome such predicament. Further, this essay would elaborate justification of both in posterior crumbs prior winding up with plausible conclusion.
Proceeding ahead, primarily, in present scenario, availability of innumerable and tempting ready to eat cuisines, influence eating habits and develops addiction which originates multiple diseases, especially obesity and further build up lethargicness in contrast to past decades where manual task trend kept people healthy and fit. To exemplify, 30% of china's population suffered from heart diseases due to replacement of regular diet with convenient meals,as per stats by international health association. Another highlighting reason could be upgradation of living standards. To be more precise, greed of money promotes long stretched working hours among youngsters for golden future, neglecting health. For example, most of office employees in USA are obese due to prolonged working hours.
Considering solutions, establishment of free and open gyms in community parks with timely publihment of awareness editorials, probably would lead to better health standards. Further, awarding weight losers and depicting their journey through media and social resources, would act as an inspirational source for dwellers. To exemplify, in UK, free books distribution of fitness lovers really motived rest of community towards healthy living.
To recapitulate, although it seems an arduous and challenging task to mitigate such depressing health issue in short span due to drastic effect of present scenario but it could be resolved to much extent by applying practical approach soon by administration to stem blooming flower like habitat.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It's; It is
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...nt of regular diet with convenient meals,as per stats by international health assoc...
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...ards healthy living. To recapitulate, although it seems an arduous and challen...
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...lenging task to mitigate such depressing health issue in short span due to drasti...
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...rastic effect of present scenario but it could be resolved to much extent by appl...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...sent scenario but it could be resolved to much extent by applying practical appro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, well, for example, in contrast, in short, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97297297297 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07488114945 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.722972972973 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4114225636 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.285714286 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169100074264 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508368789349 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026476444138 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882429640343 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390744358749 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...nce for healthy and elongated lifespan. Its frequently coversated that fitness was ...
^^^
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...nt of regular diet with convenient meals,as per stats by international health assoc...
^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ards healthy living. To recapitulate, although it seems an arduous and challen...
^^
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lenging task to mitigate such depressing health issue in short span due to drasti...
^^
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rastic effect of present scenario but it could be resolved to much extent by appl...
^^
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...sent scenario but it could be resolved to much extent by applying practical appro...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, well, for example, in contrast, in short, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97297297297 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07488114945 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.722972972973 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4114225636 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.285714286 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169100074264 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508368789349 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026476444138 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882429640343 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390744358749 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.