Nowadays people are less fit and healthy than they were in the past, which could affect their long term health. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?
People getting easier life style with the technology development. However, it can be seen that, people health and fitness is going down compared to past and adversely effect on the long term wellness. In this essay will introduce some reasons and actions, which can be taken to overcome the situation.
With the evidence of researches identified that, people obesity index is going up, while decreasing the average lifetime. One of the reason is change in life style. People more like to use fast food as their main meal than past, which consumes more fat intake to the body. For example, use of fast food while driving and adversely practice it to their children. In addition, lack of exercise due to time constrains is another factor due to the use of easy transportation. Furthermore, people work with more stress due to the work condition and economy constrains.
Nevertheless, the life style, people should give the priority not only economy sustainability but also to the health. The practice of health care should be started from school age by enforcing food habits. For example, forcing the healthy food on school interval meal. Further, introduce insurance schemas, which offer annual heath check to provide proactive health guidelines. In additions, Government can provide leisure parks and open exercise areas for people. As a parents, should avoid children’s from indoor activities such as video gamming.
Considering above, even though there is a risk on heath practices, still we have a chance to win the goal by introducing good food habits and engaging with environment activities, which could improve physical health fitness and long term life span.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, as for, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23703703704 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69303832471 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7862349946 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209502371633 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588353787234 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589856386443 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130700483259 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687869907408 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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