While still too many areas of the world are plagued with famine and drougth, in many developed countries we are witnessing an extreme waste of food. In this essay I will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon and propose some solutions to tackle it.
Food has always been a primary need for humans. Our ancestors made a living by hunting and fishing, which made it quite a challenge to gain enough food to feed a family group. Human history is scattered by famine ensued by wars, poor health conditions and lack of technology. Only in the last century man has been able to produce food in an unprecedented quantity, enough to feed billions of individuals. There is no doubt that the technological development in farming, food processing and storing represents a giant breakthrough for mankind. Virtually no one on Earth should suffer from shortage of food or get diseases caused by malnutrition. Sadly, this continues to happen, for many reasons.
Inequal distribution and extremely discounted crop prices are the major implications for the waste of food. Developed countries have the potential to feed the whole planet. Thanks to the introduction of genetical modifications, high-tech and other cutting edge technologies, farming has boosted its productivity and it is theoretically well equipped to face the cahallenge to feed eight billion human beings. Unfortunately, the food surplus is simply thrown away while thousands would need it desperatly. Governments should take actions to tackle this issue and support organizations that send aids overseas for the needy.
It would be too easy, however to hold only government and politicians.responsible for this scandal. Everyone could be instrumental in cutting down on wating food by taking some simple actions. First, people should avoid to buy excessive quantity of food, especiall when it comes to life-short good that go bad quickly, like meat, eggs or milk. All of these aliments contain valuable minerals and vitamins people affected by malnutrition urgently need. Secondly, it would be a good idea to prepare meals with leftovers, that by the way, can be also taken away from restaurants. It is the perfect combination to cook nutritious dishes, save money and reduce waste.
To sum up, I think that the main reasons why people throw away food for mainly two reasons. Industrialization allows to produce enormous quantity of food, which makes prices plummet. Secondly, people should buy just the food they need and try to make proper use of leftovers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid buying'.
Suggestion: avoid buying
...me simple actions. First, people should avoid to buy excessive quantity of food, especiall w...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'producing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: producing
...y two reasons. Industrialization allows to produce enormous quantity of food, which makes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as for, i think, no doubt, by the way, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2113022113 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01428241813 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609336609337 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5927334812 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2173913043 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6956521739 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286878890508 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731796846644 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606646915862 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153688938415 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686772760989 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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