Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education.
Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life?
Justify your opinion with relevant examples.
The graduation certificate, one of the keys for brightness future, is taken a highly consideration by many people. At present, t is believed that being a university graduate is essential for a successful career life, but there are many celebrities who did not complete their studying. I partially agree with the importance of the university education for people, but it is not the only key for a success. This essay will discuss, firstly, why does education is important in some cases, and secondly, other factor for success as skills or hobbies, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Some people are raised with the idea of that the higher education is the essential path to secure a significant secured future. When people get their graduation certificate from a reputable university, it seduces several job opportunities in multinational companies. Nowadays, job market is very competitive in some certain fields; therefore, people, who get their accreditation, have a good chance to join mega companies with a fruitful future. For example, Mega companies such as Google or Microsoft ask for a specific certification in their job adverts, and only those certified are eligible to apply for.
On contrary, many celebrities do not have any educational back ground; however, they are very successful in their field. Success depends sometimes on the personal skills and talents, and these would be the only keys to be a fame person. We can figure out some examples of those people all over the world. For instance, games do not require to have any certificate such as Football, and many players become famous due to their talent only such as Mohamed Salah who plays in Liverpool club and becomes as a figure for all spectators; although he did not complete his higher education.
To sum up, education is important for people, but we can not deny that skills and talents play a pivotal role in some people life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('consideration') instead of another adjective.
...he keys for brightness future, is taken a highly consideration by many people. At present, t is believ...
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Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: be
...ll discuss, firstly, why does education is important in some cases, and secondly, ...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'depends'.
Suggestion: sometimes depends
...very successful in their field. Success depends sometimes on the personal skills and talents, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05993690852 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89401187968 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.181731911 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.384615385 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270151462754 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101909791159 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057554706332 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168170938462 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178772560245 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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