Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The modern society is facing a plethora of social issues and the most crucial from all is the massive production of household and industrial waste. The unnecessary excessive usage of products and its non-reusability are the major reasons for the increase in the quantity of rubbish. Therefore, some stringent actions to promote recycling and monitoring over-usage needs to be taken by government level to curb this problem.
First and the foremost reason for the uncontrolled waste production is the consumption of products in huge quantities and in a un-planned manner by people. In addition to this, people purchase the items including packaged food, plastic bottles and decoration material without making any count for social or personal events which consequently, lead to waste production. To illustrate, a study revealed that every year 100 tons of trash has been produced from the marriages throughout India. Secondly, most of the products are manufactured using non-biodegradable materials such as plastic, rubber and polythene which do not get decomposed. Furthermore, these products are easily available at cheap rates which enhances its usage, as a result, increases the level of trash.
To alleviate this problem certain measures are required to be taken by authorities. Firstly, the material and products used in social and public events should be monitored by the government officials, in order to, minimize the unnecessary wastage. Next, strict norms should be enforced to reduce the manufacturing of non-recyclable products which in turn will encourage the people to make use of biodegradable products. To exemplify, the government of Himachal a state in India, passed a law that obligates the vendors to use only perishable cups and plates.
In conclusion, although many reasons such as the use of plastic packaging materials and over consumerism contribute towards an increase in waste production, the government can reduce this growing problem by implementing laws and by encouraging recycling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52258064516 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12916527818 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5264177117 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114953390745 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402547069997 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265258732402 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714878529073 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207924898139 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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