Nowadays young people have to make the decision about their future career. Some people, however, believe that teachers and parents can make a better choice for their future career. Discuss both options and include your opinion with relevant examples from your own experience.
It is irrefutable that nowadays, youngsters has their own ability to take a decision to themselves to achieve their goals for their future, However, others believe that they need some assistance from their parents or teachers to make comfortable life for their future.I am of the opinion that this matter should be debated before any conclusion can be drawn.
To begin with, in this modern era, adolescent have so much talent and they are doing lot of innovations on their regular routine life. In addition to this, compare to old decades people has done lot of hard work but they have lacked how to be smart but this generation people are very smart about their jobs. Specially, technology made them to be smart and think about their carrier path, people can google it and they can get online course to learn whatever they like to do to set it. For example, In United States, around 744% youngsters are making decision themselves with out any dependencies.
On the other hand, some people believe that parents can only set it up all amenities for their son/daughter about their future because they don't know what is correct or what is wrong but parents has lot of experience and they can drive their children to achieve their dreams. Secondly, youngsters mostly spend their time with tutor so tutor can give guidance to make their life easily and they know about positive and negative about student so they can easily drive them to achieve their goals. For instance, In Japan, some youngsters are doing home schooling because they are comfortable with their parents and they feel parents only can able to set their environment smoothly.
To conclude this, parents and teachers guidance important for adolescent to make their future. however, they have to think themselves analyse it and apply their dreams to convert in to success. "This is our life we have to make it and get all the experience. Also, experience make a man perfect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89425981873 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44563006516 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492447129909 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4513753783 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343708236695 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142997909682 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671691323844 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236749597652 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444246762136 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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