In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this modern era, the growth of the food industries impacted many countries their health issues. Diabetes, High cholesterol, heart, and liver issues due to fatty and sugary food. I totally agree, if the government increase the tax for food industries then people like to prepare their own food.
Firstly, people generally prefer to have outside food on mostly weekend in order to spend time with their families. They are expecting their orders has to come as soon as possible due to this food industries has provided instance food like noodles, Pasta, and fried rice. Secondly, whoever staying alone without families, they choose fast food rather than home foods in order that they are affecting many health issues.
In many countries, Health systems are earning more money due to unhealthy food such as Australia, US, Canada, France, and England. For instance, I read one article released by World health organization. Overall 34% people are causing diabetes problem, 21% of people are causing High cholesterol, and 17 % causing Heart problem. Everyone has to aware of this and they ensure them health is highly important, Government take initiation for food industries and healthcare should be provided to all the citizens.
After slicing and dicing this topic, the government is responsible for everyone health and they can impose a tax on food industries to ensure that all the healthy people. Also, everyone understands about their health and try to avoid junk food and instance food so that our life will become very healthy rather than going to hospitals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...ing alone without families, they choose fast food rather than home foods in order th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19215686275 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50262313555 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6076214901 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264812604323 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108626762304 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482678421333 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176693494742 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244396728297 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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