The nuclear family is well developed to move geographically due to its size.
Do you think children benefit in any way from moving?
Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Elementary family are more mobile to move overseas as size is very small. This way their offsprings get benefitted both academically and culturally. In my opinion, the disadvantages of nuclear family are eclipsed by it advantages.
The predominant advantage of shifting to other advanced nation is that it provides access to better universities and also a child learn about the culture of that country. That is because getting into a university for higher education enables a mind to learn different languages and culture by indulging in different activities and programs. This results in overall development and better job opportunities in future. Research carried out in this field shows that conjugal families who moved to other countries, their children are more advanced and culturally sound as compared to those who resides in their own country with joint families. Therefore , due this reason I strongly believe that moving geographically has better effects.
Despite the benefits, there are few disadvantages also that explains how children get detach from their grandparents and even parents sometimes. This is when moving in different nation parents don’t get much time to spend with them which arouses a feeling of isolation among their offspring. This effects their brain in negative manner but later on their life they became mature adults. For example, recent survey done by Ministry of external Affairs found that families which are moved to other nations among them only 3% children came back and settled in their own nation as they no longer needed an extended family.
In conclusion, the advantages like growth in career and advancement in culture are overshadowed by disadvantages. Therefore, having weighed the pros and cons , Iam convinced that benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45390070922 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86790749055 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631205673759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2351922187 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164525134282 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601624571378 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420171135499 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10610793737 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047433950646 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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