In some countries, girls and boys are educated in different school rather than in the same school.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Essay topics:

In some countries, girls and boys are educated in different school rather than in the same school.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In some nations, children are given education in different school instead of co-educational institution. However, educating boys and girls in dissimilar school brings an advantage that they can concentrate more on education, while lack in preparing a children for real world is the main drawback.

The main advantage of diversified school is that adolescents can focus more on their education. This is because when both boys and girls studies together, they get attracted emotionally and physically towards opposite gender. This results in transfer of interest from education to temporary relationships. Also, Research has been carried out in 2017, in The United kingdom where adults who passed out from different schools are doing excel in their carrier as compared to those who did their education from co-education school. Thus, studying in different school brings an opportunity to excel in studies.

Despite the carrier benefit a student get, same school do not prepare children for real sphere of life. This can be explained as when children grows up and starts their professional life, they found themselves in difficult situation as they have never experienced to live with opposite gender. This effects not only personal life but also have detrimental effects on carrier. To exemplify, Multinational companies in developed countries offers employment to those who took education from co-education schools. Hence, students who studies from single-sex schools finds difficult to adjust themselves in real world.

In conclusion, Single-sex schools brings advantage of focus towards education, while absence of experience of real world is the main setback .

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.604743083 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92503523255 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.399345719 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303321870085 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114371971303 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621798906976 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196146550364 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853425877615 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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