Old workers often retire at the age of 60 or 65. Some people say that workers should be allowed to work as long as they want to. What is your opinion?.
Many argue that old workers ought to be permitted to work even after reaching the retirement age of 60 or 65 years. I totally disagree with this statement and shall point out the benefits from retiring employees at the age of 60 or 65.
Firstly, retiring employee at the age of 60 benefits many organizations in different ways. To elaborate on this, as people retire at the age of 60, they provide an opportunity for younger employees to compete for that, expected to be, empty vacancy. Thus, benefit the company in terms of individual performance and productivity. In addition, although old workers have a great deal of experience in their field of work, their salaries and benefits represent a considerable amount of any company financial expenses. Companies would benefit from reallocating the financial resources to other fields that may benefit the whole company. For example, ABC Company stated that it redirected the financial resources dedicated to the recent retired employees to provide training course to all current working employees.
Secondly, retired workers are more value assets to the society after retirement. To illustrate, many companies would hire retired employees to work as consultants or trainers. By applying this approach, retired employees get the opportunity to transfer their knowledge and experience to others. For instance, Mick Coley, who retired recently, was hired by XYZ Company to conduct seminars to transfer his own knowledge and expertise to younger employees in the field of welding. So far the seminar attendance schedule is booked for the next 3 months.To conclude, despite the fact that retiring workers ate the age of 60 is considered hard by some people, this action benefits organizations financially. Also, it is a proven fact that retired employees can be of more value added to the society after retirement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25838926174 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89933080102 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4800564181 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253311579961 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964010602883 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079011483209 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205388369006 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656667384142 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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