With the development of medication and health care, people are more likely to live longer than before. I tend to believe that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.
Generally, living longer means that people could have more time to spend on what they like. Firstly, this will allow people to pursue their hobbies. Most of our time is spent in earning a livelihood and we rarely get time for ourselves. For example, if I have a life expectancy of more than a hundred years, I will probably spend the next 20 years mastering a musical instrument such as a piano. Secondly, scientists might have more time to do their research for a better world. Imagine if Einstein, Newton and all the brilliant scientists could live longer, they might have contributed more to the development of science. Thirdly, longer life expectancy means we have more time to spend with our family and friends, whom many people always regret that they should have spent more time with.
On the other hand, a longer life probably means that government needs to spend more money on caring for old people instead of education or other equally important areas. This may have adverse consequences on the future of a country since the money is invested in people who do not contribute to economic development. If these funds are invested in education and skill development of the youth, the country will have a brighter future.
To sum up, there are some downsides of living longer, however, the advantages generally overweigh them. And some of the disadvantages of a longer life could be dealt with the benefit that living longer brings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...dvantages generally overweigh them. And some of the disadvantages of a longer life could be...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the benefit that living longer brings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92727272727 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61414840834 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2773269384 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236738946677 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909707530176 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652495600022 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16793224235 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417507630354 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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