One of the consequences of improved technology is that many jobs that used to be done by people can know be completed by robots or computers. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Robotic and computer technologies have increasingly being used in various fields due to accurate results. That's why it takes some people' jobs these days. However, the question of whether the advantages of these technologies outweigh the disadvantages is arguably the most contentious issue. This essay aims to explore the benefits and drawbacks for utilizing such technologies in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that technologies have facilitated a plethora of things and conspicuously enhanced the quality of individuals life. Firstly, most of the companies nowadays employed the computer technologies in their daily basis. For instance, the majority of nowadays communications between plenty of organizations and their clients are made through emails or video calls. secondly, it's irrefutable that computers or even robotics provide accurate information and perform extremely complicated tasks with very precise performance. For example, surgical robotic procedures are the best option for most of the surgeons especially in very hard cases due to the high accuracy that it offers.
However, there are some negative impacts on using technology. First of all, it's a machinery device, so, there is high possibilities to be down. Take the most airplane crashes as an example, the main reason of several tragedies accidents is an error at the airplane' computers. Second of all, these technologies have raised the unemployment rate in many nations who are relying mainly on these technologies. Saudi Arabia as an example started replacing most of their daily works into computer ones. This in fact, makes some occupations unnecessary such as paper messengers workers and many other positions.
To sum up, in spite of using technology might affect cost many workers their position, I personally think its extremely hard to live without it, as it helps us in different fields such as medical and transportation. Thus, I really thing that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50636942675 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05245265976 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608280254777 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0378338394 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.705882353 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187485922351 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557558829539 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430547255755 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116429436258 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644561940846 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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