One good way to promote world peace is through international sporting events.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Different events are conducted at the international level for the sake of peace. Some people believe that international gaming events are one of the best methods that for promoting worldwide peace. This essay is in agreement with the above-said notion.
To begin with, the host country will make the best preparation for the security of the teams coming from the other countries. This allows different people from a different culture to come together and share their views which in turn leads to the eradication of wrong myths and prejudices. For instance, the survey done by “The Time” reveals that every year different game events are held in different countries and when people are interviewed about their experience, around 72 percent of people replied that their misconception is cleared after meeting the people of other nations.
Furthermore, the government of the country gets a chance to meet foreign diplomats in a friendly competitive spirit and without the tension of war or trade. Apart from this, the hospitality extended during this visit to these foreigners can act as a shot in the arm in strengthening the bonds. Moreover, these games can become peacemaker for those countries which traditionally oppose each other and can become a perfect example of sportsmanship. For instance, India and Pakistan are known for their bitter ties because of Kashmir even though people from both nations tend to meet and greet each other dearly when a large event is planned.
To conclude, in my opinion, games can become the best way to establish peace it internationally level because it eliminates the misconceptions and brings people from different nations and cultures together on one platform.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22545454545 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83367238289 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5239266434 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788575929625 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376524462635 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055341910608 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708422558706 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059219801439 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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