One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion What do you think the causes are What solutions can you suggest

Essay topics:

One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Many major cities and large towns are facing with drastic increase in myriad of vehicles getting on to the roads leading to traffic blocks. This essay with discuss both the problem and solutions in order to reduce the traffic congestion.
One of the recent main causes for the amount of traffic to increase is that, huge number of youngsters are migrating from small village to the metros for earning. Eventually this will lead to increase flow of vehicles onto the roads ending up in dense traffic congestion. Since the city is not planned to accommodate these huge number of vehicles the roads get crowded because it is not wide enough. For instance, Bangalore was not an IT hub couple of years back, and it needed only smaller roads, but since the IT boom happened in the city humongous number of people moved to the metro and finally every road now in the garden city is filled with vehicles. The alarming fact is that each day many more vehicles keep adding and this situation can worsen if necessary, steps are not taken.

It is important that the governments assess these conditions and make required measure to reduce the traffic. One imperative solution for this is to introduction good public transport system which ought to be well connected and frequency of connectivity. For example, I had recently visited Kochi and was stunned to see how drastically the city had eliminated the traffic on the road. Since the introduction of metro rail an exponential number of people are using public transport and resulted in lesser vehicles on roads and resulting in congestion free roads.

To conclude, if good public conveyance is available people sill chose to use them, rather than spending hours to just commute few kilometers. Lesser cars on road and better planning of roads can make commuting a stress free. Indeed, there are even more benefits such as lesser pollution, savings in fuel consumption, and so on.

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Average: 8.3 (9 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91717791411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55511897831 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6506976201 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137024790896 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489007284949 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412936767193 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901507013827 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598794986199 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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