Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness?
Money plays a significant role in people's life. But money cannot buy all the happiness. In my opinion, even with less money, an individual can lead a joyful life, and there are various other aspects that lead to happiness.
To begin with, some copious people live below poverty life. Their earnings are comparatively lesser than many, but still, they lead a happy life. Money is required for fulfilling the basic needs, but it does not mean that the higher you earn more happiness. For example, celebrities earn millions, but in the news, we hear the miserable family life they lead. Most of them have broken marriages, have more tension, stress and so on. In spite of earning more money, they find it hard to get happiness in their life.
On the other hand, there are other aspects of life where happiness can be found. Family and friends are the most essential aspect that an individual should treasure in his life. Whenever a person is having any problem in his life, he can approach his friends and family for any support. A person can be joyful when he is out with his partner and children. Leading a proper family life can be the most cheerful moment in any person's life. For example, in a recent interview by a CEO of a top MNC said that he hardly spends time with his family and friends and have forgotten when he had a happy moment last. Despite having a huge bank balance, he regrets that he has not spent any happy moments with his family and friends.
To conclude, money is needed to take care of one's basic necessity but losing family and friends to earn more money can prove a wrong decision in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, for example, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56849315068 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2686643771 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517123287671 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8026022216 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4705882353 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194767281623 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804823593849 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501895643152 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136928148565 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034411231299 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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