Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of
pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both
views and give your opinion.
Major cities in the world are getting polluted today at an alarming rate. Myriad of people feel that the reason for this is because more cars are getting added to the roads whereas others believe that industrial wastes are majorly to be blamed. This essay will discuss both the views, however, in my opinion, industrial waste pollute cities at a larger scale.
On one hand, copious vehicles are added to our roads. Since numerous individuals are choosing to migrate to larger cities from small towns, the population is growing. Nowadays, each family member owns a vehicle for ease of commuting. Eventually, more cars lead to air pollution because of smoke emission. For example, Delhi is rated as the most polluted city in India, when a study was conducted to check why the air pollution has risen, it was found that the number of vehicles had doubled in the last five years. Therefore, this was the major contributor for air pollution.
On the other hand, industries have boomed rapidly in all metros. Industrial waste management is a humongous challenge for all industrialists. Since most of the industries are operating within the city limits their waste discharges are polluting the drinking water which causes water pollution. For example, Tirupur is famous for garment manufacturing and lots of industries are operating there. Apparently, these manufacturers are dumping their chemical dye discharges into rivers and canals in order to ease their work. This is polluting the drinking water sources for the people of this city and even most of the underground water levels are contaminated with hazardous chemical water.
To conclude, industries are a major contributor for polluting the cities more compared to vehicles.
However, to reduce the pollution from vehicles, E-Vehicles are being introduced and similar initiatives also have to be incorporated for polluting industries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...of people feel that the reason for this is because more cars are getting added to the road...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ngous challenge for all industrialists. Since most of the industries are operating wi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30132450331 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77304190628 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3178700135 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153346829088 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523545185391 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397416926749 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826794365355 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527744518415 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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