Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefit that it will replace face - to - face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Internet learning is gaining popularity all around the globe. Due to this, several individuals affirm that learning through the internet has numerous merits for the greater good. Whereas, people with dissimilar views think that conventional methods of obtaining knowledge cannot be replaced. Is this drastic change in education system really possible? An in-depth scrutiny of the above will lead to an insightful response.
While it is convenient to adopt one aspect over the other, I prefer to present a balanced ergo objective assessment. In my opinion, there are some pros of gaining skills by modern technology, however, there are some factors which support conventional education system. The following(succeeding/subsequent) two paragraphs will detail both aspects extensively.
First and foremost, conveniency in scheduling lectures. Secondly, variety of material in efficient learning. A case in point would be, a research from the Cambridge University showed that 90% of the dissertations are written with miscellaneous ways.
On the other hand, conventional education helps in enhancing interpersonal skills. Furthermore, knowledge form an experienced educator is crediible source to accelerate learning. In support of the above, for the IELTS essay writing a former IELTS teacher or examiner would be great for the evaluation of learners essays.
Keeping all of the above-mentioned facts in mind, benefits such as convenient lectures and an abundance of study material are evident. In contrast, communication skills and appropriate knowledge is well-worthy of an equivalent consideration.To conclude, as is with most things in life, there are two sides to the matter. Fortunately, in this case, both of these are constructive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77131782946 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51364873319 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65503875969 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8212120521 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5882352941 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131589032896 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387644745993 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350964094573 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638436692139 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044660269255 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.59 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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