During recent plane journey, you sat next to the businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to that person.
Remind him when and where you met
Tell him what kind of a job you are interested in
Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Sir,
I hope you are doing great! I am unsure about your remembrance, However, I would like to remind you that we met last week on Friday evening during the flight journey from France to London. We had a very fruitful conversation about the hotel business. As per our communication, I am writing this letter to you to ask about the possible job you were discussing with me.
I have completed a ‘Hotel Management’ degree from London and working as a waiter in one of the reputed restaurants at Queens Square, London. Recently, due to some financial reasons, I am bound to search for a new job opportunity. Confident communication with guests and fluency in several languages are my strong points, which would be an added advantage for the hotel. Additionally, a variety of shifts would not be a constraint for me and extension to the working hours is also acceptable.
I believe, the mentioned qualities definitely would be beneficial for your restaurant, rather I would try to give my best and the experiences received at the hotel would be appreciable. I have already collected the plethora of information about the outlets of your restaurants and as mentioned in the rules of the hotel, I totally agree with the fact that punctuality and discipline is the most crucial factor one should have.
I am looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Alen Potter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...iscussing with me. I have completed a 'Hotel Management' degree fro...
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Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...ed in the rules of the hotel, I totally agree with the fact that punctuality and discipline is the most ...
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Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ost crucial factor one should have. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97478991597 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03737051734 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2141064496 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.636363636 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132146974188 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505428755808 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666481510424 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088602161272 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822049106771 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.