Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals, tackle these problems.
It is common knowledge that overpopulation is a problem of today’s world. The question, however, arises, what can be done to decrease the impact of that problem. This essay will attempt to cause and effects, of that problem and will also attempt to provide some practical solutions.
First and foremost, it is often claimed that the problem of overpopulation is the problem of whole glob and might be hard to successfully solved. Overpopulation can lead to overcrowding and poor quality housing in many large cities. Moreover, this may lead to increase crime rate because of the poor quality of life and easy access to drugs. Another serious consequence is overcrowding on the roads, which create enormous amount of pollution which have negative impact on the health of the residents of the city.
Luckily, there are some practical solution that can be applied to reduce the problem of the overpopulation. First of all, I think that the problem of the overpopulation government should take as a serious matter. Because in my opinion governments does not do much about already existing problem of the highly level of the population in the big cities. I believe, if government would create a free public transport the number of cars on the roads would decrease which would have positive outcome on the roads traffic and the quality of air. In addition, government should create a program for youths which would reduce number of crimes committing by them.
From the arguments that I have presented above it can be seen that even though the problem of the overpopulation of urban areas may seem to be a very complex issue it can be solved or reduced but will definitely require more outside of box thinking.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, i think, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99652777778 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83475420527 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2703657384 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0736523415082 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291370881695 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300279377708 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445565641223 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181518727161 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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