Parents are busy nowadays and they are not able to give time to their children. So they are becoming indisciplined and careless. What do you think are the main factors behind this? What remedial actions can be taken by the parents?
It is evident that parents are the first teachers of the offsprings as they mould their overall behaviour. However, in the recent years children’s behaviour are getting worse day by day, as parents become more busier and are unable to spend time with them. This essay will explain the factors responsible for this and the possible solutions that parents can take to overcome the situation.
To commence with, the first and foremost reason behind this is the change in lifestyle. In today’s world, where everyone wants to get a secure and better life, parents work hard by doing jobs to earn enough money so that all the necessities get fulfilled. Inflation is also one of the reason behind this, as nowadays mostly everything is more costlier than that of the past, leaving both the parents no options but to go for jobs. Such occasions make the children feel alone and may go astray because of the lack of parental supervision.
In order to overcome this menace, parents should adopt several simple changes in their daily day life. They should spend time with their children everyday, even 2-3 hours are sufficient. They should ask them about the day spent, what they have done or what are their ambitions in future. This small step will change the connection between both of them. They should also keep an eye on their activities to give a proper and safe nurture and care. They can organise some weekly outings to get more time for the offsprings.
To conclude, this problem is not insurmountable and it can solved easily by having small changes in parents’ lifestyle. Such small steps can be seen as inappropriate but these are the things which actually creates a bond within the birth givers and their wards, and can not be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'busier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: busier
...ing worse day by day, as parents become more busier and are unable to spend time with them....
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'costlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: costlier
... this, as nowadays mostly everything is more costlier than that of the past, leaving both the...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...y should spend time with their children everyday, even 2-3 hours are sufficient. They sh...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y have done or what are their ambitions in future. This small step will change the connec...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...roblem is not insurmountable and it can solved easily by having small changes in paren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51903861732 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9183173834 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349437957523 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109490651247 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432740735124 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195552183752 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533232248505 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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