Parents should not pressure their children to choose a particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose a career path they like. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
Career is the most important decision in one’s life. Many parents impose their decision on their children’s career. While, others oppose this notion that children should choose their own path. I am totally in agreement with people who support that young people should have rights to choose their own destiny. I will justify my reasons in the following paragraph with examples.
Many parents may worry about their children that they decision may be harmful for them in future. This is because young people are not mature enough to choose the right path for them. For instance, many youngsters in Pakistan love to play football in streets and spend most of their in playing football rather than studying and learning. As youngsters don’t know that there is no career of footballers in Pakistan, so parents force them to study in schools. Otherwise, it would ruin their future career.
However, Imposed decisions can have adverse effect on career growth of children. Firstly, mostly children end up hating it, when they are forced to do against their will. It leads to depression, anxiety, frustration, and may end up in suicide. Secondly, they do not have the required motivation and determination to do task and will to achieve success in their future goals. Moreover, they don’t have the direction to become a successful professional and leader. For example, Bill Gates, founder of Microsoft and billionaire, became successful because he followed his passion and goals till the end. Thus, passion and interest are required to be
In conclusion, children have the right to choose their own goals. Parents should not force them to choose their destiny as it hinders their career growth and success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53660651883 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551971326165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7518115371 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34030058405 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112907146477 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873171471388 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237508887169 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889032079802 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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