Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
Children love to do enjoyable activities. It is argued that interesting activities, for instance, words building, can give better skills and creativity to children than reading. While others claim that reading is more beneficial for children. I personally agree this notion that enjoyable activities are more beneficial than just children. I will justify my opinion in the following paragraph with examples.
To commence with, Children are adept in learning new activities by imitating other’s activities. For example, children spend most of their time with their parents. They adopt what they see that’s why parenting contributes a significant role in developing children’s mind and behavior. They are more inclined towards practical activities which they find enjoyable and spend more hours to it, for instance, songs and poems has become a widespread method to teach children. In schools, teachers play poems and cartoons on screen, which hook them for several hours along with other practical activities.
Furthermore, Useful activities like building blocks teach them analytical and mathematical skills in a young age. Sports and games boost their endurance and enhance their cognitive skills, for example, arrow shooting increases focus ability, horse riding enhances stamina, and swimming improves strength and overall performance of body. They have strong immune system and less prone to viruses and other diseases. Children grew up in creative environment are more likely to succeed in early ages. They grow up by learning and doing creative techniques which can enhance their artistic skills in the latter age.
In conclusion, I personally recommend doing enjoyable activities with children because it play significant role in developing a child’s mind and it is the most beneficial and fastest method to enhance their skills and creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6134751773 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80732163742 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9125086946 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227388975609 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814737417518 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587061315574 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155613607626 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564096807971 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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