People are becoming too dependent on the Internet and phone. Is it a positive or negative development?
In this technological world, it has been seen that people become more dependent on mobile phones and internet as compared to the past. It is due to the easy availability of a network and wide variety of services on mobile phone. I think it has brought both positive and negative aspects on individuals and society as a whole.
On the one hand, now people are busy with their hectic schedule so they hardly get time for their daily commitments like paying bills and needs such as shopping, food from a restaurant etc. By actually visiting those places. Therefore, this advancement provides a feature like google pay, amazon and so on to accomplish their tasks with just a click. This development not only make their life hassle free, but also give them a wide range of varieties while making a choice at their own pace. Furthermore, internet and mobile phone provide an opportunity to develop and enhance their skills by pursuing online courses from their home almost in every field. Overall, depending on internet has brought enormous benefits to individuals if it is used properly.
On the other hand, many natives, especially teenagers and youngsters usually prefer to spend longer hours on this gadget to relax themselves through chatting with friends, playing games and movies rather than socializing with their dear ones. This type of sedentary lifestyle has an adverse impact on their health in terms of obesity, eye vision etc. Besides this, when an individual become addicted to it, then he is too influenced by it that he hesitate to interact with others. As a result, they do not only lack social and communication skills, but also develop antisocial behaviour in them.
In conclusion, although there are immense benefits of internet. It has made our life so easy that people can do multi task conveniently. However, the impact of its extreme usage can not be denied. It is suggested that it should be monitored properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97230769231 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65888529386 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1339241668 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226560670206 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624639091003 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729576259348 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135239872092 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102276932311 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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