People are consuming more sugar nowadays and it is causing health problems.
Some people feel that the government should take responsibility, while others feel it is the responsibility of the individual.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion?
It is irrefutable that excess sugar can lead to many problems related to health, therefore some individuals argue that state should take reasonable steps to control this. While, others believe that individuals should take responsibility to take care of themselves. In this essay both views will be discussed followed by personal opinion.
To begin with, state officials have authority to eliminate the hazardous food from the food distribution chain, therefore, government should take stand in controlling these health risk elements. For instance, government funded lab testing centers are meant to cross-checks the food available in the market regarding permissible limit as per the health regulations, therefore law enforcement agencies can verify products and prohibit the organizations which are not following rules and regulations of food safety in order to provide healthy food to people in society.
On the other side, individuals itself are more aware of their needs therefore people can strictly monitor their diet rather than depending on government. Every individual has different requirements in terms of nutrition and to remain physically fit and they themselves are more knowledgeable about their daily needs, thus individuals should take accountability of own instead of leaving it on government officials. In my opinion, I believe that government can control these health hazards on large scale, but ultimately it is consumer who should take final decision of maintaining health by taking required diet.
In conclusion, although, government can restrict manufacturers from manufacturing health hazard products, individuals should feel the responsibility of maintaining health because everyone has different limits of food requirements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... take reasonable steps to control this. While, others believe that individuals should...
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Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...oth views will be discussed followed by personal opinion. To begin with, state officials have...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this health' or 'these healths'?
Suggestion: this health; these healths
...rnment should take stand in controlling these health risk elements. For instance, government...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... different limits of food requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83333333333 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12430269848 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.5432170878 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.222222222 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268857539035 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115916601337 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467792116779 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158180435848 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492145059355 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.13 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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