People are different in their reaction toward situations in their lives. While there are some people whole would accept an adverse situation as their reality and live with it, others would fight to change it. In this essay, we are going to disucss the two group of people and their attitude toward changing their profession before a conclusion is made.
On the one hand, there are some people who hesitate to make a decision to change their job. This could be due to the fear of unemployment and the lack of financial sources. For example a student who graduated from the faculty of accounting who could not find a job as an accountant and decided to work temporary as a call center agent to meet his financial needs.He will not be satisfied with his job as it does not meet his ambitious career, yet he can not take the initiative and resign to start pursuing his career so he decided to abandon his dreams. As it is showing, people can accept the fact to work undesirable jobs to support themselves. Thus, they will try to live with it and accept it as their reality.
On the other hand, some people will struggle toward achieving their goals and obtaining their dream job. for instance , a frech graduate accountant who found it difficult to work in his career due to the high competition, so he decidecd to work as a part timer. Meanwhile, He purused a further studies to obtain diploma in the accounting to excel his abilities in the accounting. He did not accept to leave his dreams behind and he tried to improve his academic records to obtain his dream job.
Personally, I believe that people should not let external factors confine them in a situation that they do not accept. We should work hard to improve our current situation, no matter how long does it take, we can do it.
People are different in their reaction toward situations in their lives. While there are some people whole would accept an adverse situation as their reality and live with it, others would fight to change it. In this essay, we are going to disucss the two group of people and their attitude toward changing their profession before a conclusion is made.
On the one hand, there are some people who hesitate to make a decision to change their job. This could be due to the fear of unemployment and the lack of financial sources. For example a student who graduated from the faculty of accounting who could not find a job as an accountant and decided to work temporary as a call center agent to meet his financial needs.He will not be satisfied with his job as it does not meet his ambitious career, yet he can not take the initiative and resign to start pursuing his career so he decided to abandon his dreams. As it is showing, people can accept the fact to work undesirable jobs to support themselves. Thus, they will try to live with it and accept it as their reality.
On the other hand, some people will struggle toward achieving their goals and obtaining their dream job. for instance , a frech graduate accountant who found it difficult to work in his career due to the high competition, so he decidecd to work as a part timer. Meanwhile, He purused a further studies to obtain diploma in the accounting to excel his abilities in the accounting. He did not accept to leave his dreams behind and he tried to improve his academic records to obtain his dream job.
Personally, I believe that people should not let external factors confine them in a situation that they do not accept. We should work hard to improve our current situation, no matter how long does it take, we can do it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...enter agent to meet his financial needs.He will not be satisfied with his job as i...
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Line 6, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ir goals and obtaining their dream job. for instance , a frech graduate accountant ...
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Line 6, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... obtaining their dream job. for instance , a frech graduate accountant who found i...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60436137072 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48096802591 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514018691589 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9454223187 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429823618363 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184762335058 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215791085898 0.0667982634062 323% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31135305919 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.338610496507 0.056905535591 595% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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