People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past, what are the reasons for this? What do you think can be done for it?
The number of physically unfit people and patients is aggressively increasing whereas people in the past used to be more energetic and fit. The key factors behind this upsetting trend is unawareness and unhealthy lifestyle to survive in socially competitive society. In my opinion, general awareness about the significance of exercise and free physical training facilities can effectively control the numbers.
There are several reasons for the ignorance towards health. One such is the blind race for money to establish social dominance in the society, which is one of the majors. Unfortunately, a person with a lot of money is considered as more successful than a physical healthy person, which is a real wealth. Furthermore, there has been excessive dependency on technology, which offers everything at doorstep, and consumption of fast food has made people lethargic and obese. For instance, most of the youths spend their time in front of computers while eating unhealthy food. Thus, it is really our lifestyle to blame for our unfitness.
The most effective and efficient solution is to teach younger generation about the importance of health and how to maintain it. Authorities can run general awareness campaign on the internet and TV, to encourage people towards healthy lifestyle and serious consequence of negligence in the long run. For example, India successfully reduces the number of people at hospitals by constant TV advertisements. Furthermore, as precaution is better than cure, a part of health care budget can be allocated to set up fitness centers. Thus, people will participate more when they notice the efforts by their leaders.
In Conclusion, unawareness and excessive reliance on technology as well as fast food is the key reason behind increasing number of unfit and inactive people. It can be effectively suppressed by proper physical education and governments initiatives to construct more fitness centers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, really, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40131578947 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03173856259 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3783782021 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207735398162 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642105621713 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447840252759 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118446614345 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200138306347 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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