People consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such a cell phone) or service (example medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree 1 minute?

Essay topics:

People consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such a cell phone) or service (example medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree 1 minute?

It is contemplative that the cost is the cardinal criteria for few people's choice while purchasing any product or services. As per my opinion, I think price and quality go hand in hand and depends on the product or services being bought.

First and foremost thing that matters is the quality when buying healthcare or cosmetic products, because investing money in getting unworthy and low standard product or service is a bad bargain to be done. In other words, a low value compromised product may affect your health severely for instance, a face cream which is cheap but not as per standard can do too much damage to your face skin. Similarly, low grade food item purchased may tend to upset stomach and bad health.

Secondly quality is utmost significant when it comes to services such as medical treatment. In case you opt for a cheaper hospital and did not get any proper care and treatment. So that might risk your health and in the worst case can take away a live too.

Nevertheless, cost is sometimes also important when it comes to budget for a common man therefore the objects which do not affect us directly can be bought on cheap prices. For instance electronic items, decorative items, small furnitures (coffee table or side table), etc.

To conclude the cost consideration and quality bargain while shopping depends on the object being purchased. Product or services directly impacting our health should prioritise quality first whereas things which are of indirect use can be bought for lower prices.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'furnitures'' or 'furniture's'?
Suggestion: furnitures'; furniture's
...ectronic items, decorative items, small furnitures coffee table or side table, etc. To ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, i think, such as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93385214008 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57703313707 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2633115125 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170965470659 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630113913695 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598794448376 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927845525348 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352515717517 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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