Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business. To what extent do you agree?

Essay topics:

Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business. To what extent do you agree?

Most important method for flourishing sales is advertising and promoting the product or service being sold. In my opinion, I think, that although marketing and advertising is majorly significant for a prosperous business the quality and cost of the product along with customer care is also very essential.

Nowadays promotions are becoming one very popular way for enhancing a product's sales, and not to be mentioned they work magically. Being in human nature, when one sees a picture or a photograph of anything on almost everything daily, they become fascinated for it and ultimately end up buying it. This way there are huge shoot ups in sales with the help of attractive advertising strategies.

However, marketing tends to help in business, equally worthy point to success is the quality and price. Consumers will purchase a well publicised product once, but what if it does not meet their standards, no one will buy them again. The same goes with the cost, an expensive product will not hold constant sales. Hence a good quality effective priced will be the one winning the race. Such companies will have good profit in long runs.

Additionally, another principal rule leading to better trade is the customer care. As we all know in today's world customer is the God, so keeping them happy and contented can maintain relations for longer period resulting in better sales.

In conclusion, the advertisement and promotions are axiomatically the primary rule for successful business, all the factors such as quality, cost and customer satisfaction cannot be ignored and are very valuable for a long-running business.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ot be ignored and are very valuable for a long-running business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17803030303 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83067601445 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.023890734 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101883998544 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360123471716 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532418314133 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577350317032 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473090997674 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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