Some parents, specially mothers stay at home instead working, and some people think that they should receive monetary compensation from the government. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays few parents specially mothers are staying back home in spite of working in order to raise their children with love and care. It is considered that they should receive some payment from government's end. In my opinion I admit that they ought to be compensated financially so that the children can get the best aids and amenities along with their mother's supervision. However, the rules for such compensation has to be very strict.
Firstly, the parents, particularly mothers are giving up their careers, it is more of a requirement rather than a choice not to work because children needs their parent in their important growing phase. As mothers are sacrificing their choices, hence they must be compensated as they are shaping the future of our nation.
Secondly when a single parent is working the family income also become low, which might lead to lower living standard for children. Henceforth, monetary compensation is a need of the hour in supporting these mothers to nurture their young ones nicely.
Nevertheless, these payments from government might get exploited by few. There is always a chance that they won't actually spend that amount on kids and might use it for their own leisure. Therefore, the rules regulating such compensation has to be very strict and hard so that they serve their purpose.
In conclusion staying at home mothers have to be paid some amount from the government side to support them raising kids with quality things. But stringent directives has to be imposed by the government for these payments.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06640625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68313314824 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4620912927 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205122054002 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795770904905 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722603031397 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114947000306 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584915233755 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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